Hudios Son Of Zeus(Done!)

[hudios]

Hudios Julios
DEMIGOD

#1st Year at Camp
Age:12
Son Zeus
Alliance: Neutral

Appearance:

Eye(s):Grey, When mad or yells or uses his powers turns Lightning Blue
Hair:Bushy Wild Brown-Blondish Hair
Height:5' 1"
Build Type: Athletic, and Lean

Brief Description:
He has shaggy and messy Brown-Blondish hair that he keeps in skater cuts,he keeps his hair shaggy in a neat sort of way, his hair covers his right eye sometimes. He also has tan skin that girls think is hot, he got from his African-American mom. For being a Zeus child, he has father's intense blue eyes sometimes, but when he is not mad they are black his eyes show his hatred and power. He wears mostly black, (a pair of ripped black jeans, black shirt) gothic because of appearance, he also does not care what he puts on as long as they do not look lame and they are black. He also does not care if he smells, He is also considered really handsome by girls his own age, and cute by girls older than him.


Background:

Mortal Parent(s): Makayla Julios
Other Family: Zeus children
Pets:
Eagle-Normal Bald Eagle but trained to track, attack, hunt animals
Can Communicate with the animals his dad owns
Brief History:
Hudios Great Story

Birth:
Hudios father was Zeus and his mother's name was Makayla Julios, Zeus fell in love with her so easily, you can not blame him, he fell in love with a African-American Women with hot legs and butt and long black hair, The women was really really beautiful, in fact Zeus thought she was even more beautiful than any other women he had a child with some how. It started when Makayla was walking down the street and people kept looking at her, Suddenly she was being chased by some perverted Gangsters that tried to have her and make her do something she did not want to do. Zeus was just walking around, as he was tired he noticed the girl screaming as the Gangster's caught her and tried to do something to her. Zeus found out how perverted the Gangsters were, as soon as the Gangster's saw him they ran away, it was like he was showing them how dangerous he could be by just eye contact. The women thanked Zeus very much and fell in love with him shortly because he saved her life, he was rich, and he was cute when he got angry and all might. They then had a child that Makayla was going to name Deandre, but Zeus did not really approve of the name and named the child Hudios. A few weeks later Makayla found out Zeus was a god but she did not freak out and approved of it. Hudios father then left without saying a word.

12 Year Old:
Hudios still did not know who he was, he was kicked out of every school and had hatred for almost everybody. Hudios since he was born he was always being chased and bothered by Monsters. The young Zeus child always told his mom about this monsters his mom believed him but wanted to make him believe there was no monsters, so he believed there was none. But one day some people was coming for him as soon as they found out he was a Big Three's children, those people where the army of rouge campers that want to destroy Olympus. Hudios escaped to Camp Half Blood but his mom then died protecting him, Hudios has shown he was Zeus children by killing a half of the Group of Rouge Campers with rage. He then believed there was monsters and Gods, he is currently finding out who is his Immortal Parent.


Personality:
Hudios is a very angry and very dominating young Demigod. Most people say that he reminds them of a lion that shows his pride. Despite his anger at the gods for not saving his mom from death, Hudios still prays for them, his anger had been so large that he even has a Rage every time something bad happens.

When it comes to football and training, Hudios loves it he trains and trains and learns quickly, and also as he got more to train the more he also wanted to kill, because of that he has been searching for monsters to kill to show his pride, and have fun. People also think that Hudios is just showing off because he is son of Zeus, But Hudios is not showing off he loves doing what he does.

Hudios is also very Calm, Cool, and Collected that he does not talk to many people, this Calm thing will be quickly gone when he is on a Rage and because of his short temper. Even tough his short temper, he can sometimes control himself. This rage thing comes when his dad is insulted, when his friends are injured or killed, and when he gets really angry because of something. With this Rage he shows great anger and he yells and shows how strong he is. This young Demigod holds lots of hatred and someone needs to stop him and tell him it's not the Gods fault for his mom dying, before he does something dangerous that could cause Mount Olympus the worst day in their life.

Likes:

• His Father
  
• Training and Fighting his butt off
  
• Mount Olympus
  
• Winning every Challenge
  
• Showing The Zeus Cabin is the Best
  

Dislikes:

• Loud Noises
  
• Preppy Girls- Aphrodite kids
  
• When Hades children Get attention
  
• When Poseidon children get attention
  
• Ares kids that get on his nerves and do not know Hudios is boss
  

Skills:

• Control over lightning
  
• Ability to Fly
  
• Control over Winds
  
• Control over electricity
  
• Gigantic Strenght
  

Weaknesses:

• Listening to someone who is telling him what to do
  
• His Pride
  
• Temper
  
• Caring about anything that doesn't really concern him
  
• His obsession for Fighting
  

Passions:

• His Father
  
• Fighting and Training
  

Fears:

• His Father
  
• Being in a situation not in his control
  

Hobbies:

• Fighting and Training
  
• Weapons
  

Fighting Specialty: Hand to Hand Combat

Describe the extent of your powers/abilities:
Hand to Hand Combat Prodigy: He is really good at Hand to Hand combat and can beat an adult easily. He is kind of scared on using it on ally's because it can hurt.
Zeus Son: He is extremely powerful because of being son of a Big Three. He always has dreams on his father and his father sometimes gives him advice and talks in Hudios head, Zeus is also a live saver when Hudios prays to him. When he does any of this stuff he has headaches and when he has dreams on his father they are mostly thundery and have bad weather.
Flying: When he uses his ability to fly, he gets tired easly and can not use his powers for some posts.






Fatal Flaw: Holding Grudges Against People

Please describe why you think you can stabilize a powerful character. Minimum of two well-developed paragraphs **Big Three Only**: I am a Great Role player which some people know but i kind of have a problem since sometimes i don't really have good days and when i do have have bad days i can make short posts most of the time and when i role play i can get bored easily. I am very very active every body should know how much i love this site i am almost here everyday except on vacations and stuff. I do not make my character's invincible and that stuff i do not God Mod with my characters. I am also a very nice person in this community, and can be trusted with everything(Because of this ability of mine i might become Admin, thats what Echoe said)

Please give a brief background on your minor god**Minor Gods Only**:

Theme Song:
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The Puppeteer:
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Age: (Optional)
How long have you been role playing?:
Rate Your RPing 1-5 Stars according to our Star Rule (1 = beginner. 5= most advanced):
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Role Playing Sample:

(When i am kind of bored)
Akarui was walking on a unknown place, It was very weird and he wondered why people would choose him to give the Missing-Nin who tried to get out of Kirigakure, but he was just beat up by his own dad. The young Karasu then started thinking how the prisoner would look like "I wonder" he said with his cool, and lazy voice. Akarui was then in front of a big door that would not open to him, since this place was only allowed to ANBU, and the Great Mizukage.

Akarui then looked at the food in his hand, it was plain milk with bread, what a bad meal for people, as soon as he started thinking about that, he started thinking how his mom cooked his favorite food, Spicy Ramen. But now she was gone because of the person that considered himself a God. The young Karasu knocked the door, and a Guard suddenly yelled "Who is it" The Guard had such a furious, tough and scary voice, Akarui then said "It's me Akarui Karasu, i have been sent here to give some food to our new prisoner." Akarui noticed that the Guard was not sure if he should open it and he then did.

Akarui looked at the Guard as soon as he opend it, he was a large man full of scars in his face and body, Akarui was not frightened since he saw people in Kirigakure mostly looking like this, as soon as the Guard saw Akarui's head band he smiled. He then noticed a ANBU and another Karasu, and he also saw the Missing Nin name Cold Rai. The young Karasu headed to him and activated his White Karasu eyes, he looked at him with Frightening, and emotionless eyes, Akarui just looked at him for a while and deactivated his Karasu eyes, he then handed him the food, which was milk and brad. Akarui then turned his back against the Missing-Nin and left, he then said with his cool voice "You could have been a great Ninja in Kirigakure." He then turned his head a little to Cold Rai, and then left.

[dreamhigh]

I don't know if you already got permission from Echoe to make a Hades character but I need to tell you some things. You forgot the history part and the extend of your powers/abilities. Also, I think 7 years is way to young for someone to have such powerful abilities. Especially for a child of the big three.

[hudios]

Alright it was a WIP i knew i forgot History and extend of powers and abilities. Oh and i made him 7 because monsters were getting into him too much since he was a Big Three, and i did not want him to have the power he has now i want him to not know who he is yet, who's son he is.

[dreamhigh]

lol sorry the thread title didn't say WIP. I didn't know. I am sorry about that. If you plan so, then I guess it's okay. ( Don't forget to ask for permission to make a Big Three character if you haven't yet. )

[hudios]

Ready to be Checked i asked permission, Echoe said yes.

[Thane Scifier]

Problems:
Brief Description:
He has shaggy and messy black hair, tan skin that girls think is hot for being a Hades child, he has father's intense black eyes his eyes show his hatred and power, he wears mostly black, (a pair of ripped black jeans, black shirt) gothic because of appearance. He is also considered really handsome by girls his own age.

Background:

Mortal Parent(s): Makayla Julios
Other Family: Hades children
Pets:
Hellhound(Size of Rhino)
Can Control Creatures his dad can control
Brief History:
Hudios Great Story

The skills are also a problem. Keep working its almost there.

[Levi Faollan]

Just to put my opinion in on this app as being a son of Zeus, for starters, I don't see how he could control animals like eagles. the ability would be more of something that he would be able to communicate with them. And controling wind and lightening is ok but needs to have some limitations and the same goes with flying. Personally I would not allow the app being that he has too strong of powers (even for someone for big three) at such a young age and hasn't had much training at camp. Like Levi, even though he has been at camp for nearly six years, he can only fly if his golden eagle titan is with him. It just seems like there's too much power for such a young character. Also the youngest I have ever seen at camp was Annabeth and she was nine, I think seven is much too young to be at camp, even for a big three. I think the history needs to be a little longer and the personality needs a bit more.

[Thane Scifier]

As I said, problems with the skills.

You don't want to crush all there hopes at once eh?

What Levi pointed out is correct and the problems I saw as well.

[Aria Nicole Echoe]

If you can get these errors fixed Jamaal we'll be happy to re-evaluate

[Thane Scifier]

Are you keeping the Fatal Flaw of a Hades Child. I'm sure it works for a Zeus kid but I was just checking. I'll have to bug you to know more about his powers in general. What does in range mean?

[hudios]

Yeah i am keeping the Fatal Flaw since i thought it would work for Zeus children. Well my Rage is when i get really mad about something, not something silly, but when i am really angry and it comes to my dad being insulted or being hated, Then thats when Hudios becomes really angry, He can also become in this Rage when a loved one is hurt or killed. And when a loved one is hurt or Killed, thats when a real power comes in, a dangerous power but he can not control himself with this power, so he can only use his Super Strenght and Hand to Hand Combat.

[Thane Scifier]

So in this 'rage' how far could he fly? Just wondering.

[hudios]

When he is mad but not like really mad(When his friends are not injured or dead), He can levitate. When he is really mad he will fly if he needs to.

[Thane Scifier]

You are not going to like this very much. I don't think your able to be a Big Three. Too much is expected out of one.

A big three has to show the strength in writing to prove that there is a reason they were too good of a writer to not be a big three. They have demonstrate they know the difference between having abilities and skills and were to draw the line if that character is too strong. Its why we don't have any more Hades children because they are strong and to many people could easy god mod with those characters. My character is already at the boarder of it. A Zeus child is very much the same. We can't have such a strong character at such a young age. Where would be be at fourteen? Once his powers are trained? Once he knows how to control things? My character is very strong, and basically at the end of his training, however he has just as many weaknesses as he does strengths. He for example cannot even function in society.
He cannot carry out simple aspects of trust or communication. He may be able to defeat monsters from hell- but he does it at the cost of having no child hood. No fond memories. Nothing. He knows only of death, and hate. Basically what I am saying is you need to develop a round character. A big three has to show that they have given thought into who this character is what sort of role they well play and that they know the difference in all these aspects.

On the skills hand, you chose very, very powerful skills, one most people who would think of Zeus would think his powers are. No demi-god child of Zeus has been able to fly. These sort of things well make it difficult to allow. Because we let you do this. There well be someone else along the line who wants that and more. Leading us further and further away from where the line was.

Either fix this and prove you can be a Big Three, or I'll have to ask you to choose another God/ Goddess as a parent, one that may be easier for you to fill in as a character who you don't have to be so careful of your wording.

[Thane Scifier]

He has shaggy and messy black hair, tan skin that girls think is hot for being a Zeus child, he has father's intense blue eyes sometimes, but when he is not mad they are black his eyes show his hatred and power, he wears mostly black, (a pair of ripped black jeans, black shirt) gothic because of appearance. He is also considered really handsome by girls his own age.

Why is he considered handsome? (Personally I do not think many seven year old girls think guys are handsome, another simple reason for aging him.) Does he like his looks? Does he make an effort to look good? Does he not care what he wear, or how he smells? Does he have a nice smile? Or does he not like to smile? He has a tan, does he have it because his mother is African american and his skin is darker? Or did he spend all summer working on it?

Does he keep his hair messy in a skater cut? Is it un-kept or shaggy in a neat sort of way were it is out of his eyes?

Develop your character this way.

[hudios]

OK i changed my App

[Thane Scifier]

Accepted under probation. We are giving you a chance to show us you can handle this character.